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I love a good "bad place" story. Nice job!

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Wow. Really love this piece Polly!

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Thank you so much, Shaina! :-)

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Creepy. Loved it. Reminded me a bit of "The Ruins." Great work!

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When I read the last sentence, the only thing I could think was "Holy Sh*t". That was an awesome story. I know a few people that Hill could take.

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Thanks, Christine. Much appreciated. Yes, perhaps every town should have a hill! 😱

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Very cool! I can see why the town needs such a place.

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creepy!

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creepy hill! i like this one... it strikes a chord...if you are minded and fancy a short read of something eerily similar i would be delighted if you read Devil Iron on my stack. no pressure 😎

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